essay help please! 10 points for best ! i need to write a HOOT and introduction?

okie so i wrote this intro paragraph and my teacher wrote NO HOOK . can you fix my paragraph and add a hook to it? thank you so much ! here it is ( part of it only)The death of romeo and juliet was caused completely by fate and destiny. fate was cruel to these lovers. they were born into two families at war. if only fate had been kinder..he says that the first sentence is thesis not hook. help me write a hook please ! thanks!!!HOOK NOT HOOT.ahhaha