Please critique my introduction letter to my Japanese host family?

justlwondering

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I am applying for an exchange program to Japan. There is no language requirement to get in and initially they requested my letter in English, but then, about a week ago they asked if I could please translate my letter. I really am not that good at Japanese but I did my best to rewrite it. I was hoping you might be able to look at it just to make sure it is somewhat legible and there are no huge errors. I know it really is horrible grammar but I am okay with that as long as it can be mostly understood.

I will take any and all comments and suggestions (but please do not rewrite it as its sort of supposed to be my own work)

Thank you very much!


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