Hello. I just wrote a poem. Hope you like it!?

A Sacrifice

His eyes were once blue
Like the color of the sea

He made a gleam
A twinkle in one’s heart

But as time went by
He changed you see

He was no longer a friend
But an enemy

The hatred that filled within his eyes
Reddish flame and dark blue

Combined together he became
Someone that was a whole new person

Tears run down my cheek
For that sadness that made our friendship weak

Praying and trying to make things better
But nothing worked

Then one day
On all hollows eve

The Satin came
To take my enemy

The Devil sucked his soul right out
And I just could not bear to see

I told the evil spirit to take me instead
It was just impossible to sacrifice my ally

Not after what we have all been through

The times we shared
And the times we have spent

In my heart I did not want him or I to go
But my mind told me to just depart

I called to him
My friend who I held so dear

“Please forgive me!”
I hope this path I take will clear

The problems we have made through these years

And the memories we embellished
Will be saved in his head

As I walk the path to the living and to the dead

Love is not sacrifice!

Death is easy for anyone, but living with pain(lost love) is hard.

Your poem shows that you are lost with emotions...get some fresh air!

Take care
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good stuff. I feel your pain, but be grateful you were able to share the good times. anything negative can turn into a positive with gratitude.

wow. that was really interesting! it kind of creeped me out when you started talking about the devil, though.

sad and powerful, but not depressing. great poem.

i like it

thats very good u should submit it to poetry.com they copyright it and send u some important info through the mail pls try it u will be glad u did they publish it also

Deep and descriptive.

You know, that's not too bad..it would make a good song.

very good iam going to copy it later if i dont loose it on here i realy like it

wow, good

I LOVE IT! good job!!!

you are very talented. deep and dark. i liked it tho.

Right nice sweetie.