Would you to read my short-story?

[Joanne L]

I wrote this last week. It is based on some vivid childhood memories. I don't know how good it is. I realize there is a simplicity to the writing, but I think it comes from the fact that I am remembering things from a child's perspective. I would appreciate your thoughts on it.

It is called "Mud Pies and Witches".

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