What do you think about this verse?

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I'm 15, ive started writing songs like 2 weeks ago. Although it doesn't look like it when you read it without the instrumental, it flows perfectly with the song, imma use Wu Tang - Reunited instrumental.


im sittin in my throne
condone you to disown bring you from hall of fame to unknown
i've thrown rhymes like stones,
blown your minds like a cyclone
cause i control the microphone
im professional like al capone, entertain the home alone
if you hate i don't blame
im doing it for the pleasure and not the fame,
just like big daddy kane
it ain't no half stepping when i proclaim
my name
ruler of this game,
shame on cats that defame
a brotha tryna do his thang,
cause dang,
all you suckas do tha same,
meanwhile I transfuse, produce my rap that will seduce
when i light the fuse, you're confused cause sh*ts gets wicker than Beetlejuice
bad news, i choose, who lives and who lose,
just one more sucka been reduced,
i can bring darkness as i can bring light, i ignite,
proud and upright i give sight to the blind, combined
an extrasuperior mind and some rhymes
designed for mankind to feel afined
providing brightness in the night
at this stage It's only right you pay homage,
thats the wage on my page for me to bring engage assuage
 
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