Should I leave this part out of my novel?

Twiggy

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Another question lol.

So for my psychological thriller, it's about 80,000 words and I want to take this part out where the main character hires a hit man, because for obvious reason I think it's going too far. It would end up 75,000 words. So should I take it out?

The story is about: a timid actress who becomes deranged as she believes that her husband is trying to kill her.

I'm sorry, it's hard for me to explain it here, because the story has twists and stuff.
 
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