plz help me rewrite this one sentence? its choppy?

Jane

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I'm sorry it's more than one sentence. Plz help me still, I want it to seem like Alicia is having food with her family. She over eats on accident. If u think it's choppy plz tell me where and what I can do to change it.

Alicia wanted to sleep at the table, she felt like she ate a whole turkey which had the ingredient to make anyone drowsy. She was stuffed, as soon as the waitress left the table she spun the carrousel around on the table and took a bite of each dish except for her father's he ordered garlic shrimp. Alicia always had a strong hatred for anything that lived in the sea. She then finished off her meal, orange chicken slathered in rich citrus sauce. Anthony had one Shrump left, Alicia looked away but rolled her eyes toward him to watch him chew the crustacean.
 
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