I wRapped my own coils why won't my machine work?

[JesseGarcia]

Its complex I know, but can it be done by hand? It all smooyh and there are no cross wires, I'm just making a show gun, but in the fact I want one that will make a hitting sound not a hummm? Its a little project I been working on for a month. I mean if it don't work, then what? Quiters never prosper!