how do i describe my character? he is a handsome man who is also dangerous.?

Jane

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Michael had small round eyes that protruded out of his eye sockets, he sat staring at Jean with a cocky lean. He nodded upward at her and grinned with his smug charm. He crossed his arms and stared at her, after a few minutes Jean knew she was the only one he noticed. His hair was short with a thin tail at the bottom.
(rewrite it for the better and u winn)
 
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