it was several years ago, and all i can remember is a girl came to the wedding to see the groom and they sat under a bus stop bench. the wedding was outdoors with flowers hanging from trellis's. if anyone can help me here it would be a miracle.
it was several years ago, and all i can remember is a girl came to the wedding to see the groom and they sat under a bus stop bench. the wedding was outdoors with flowers hanging from trellis's. if anyone can help me here it would be a miracle.
Aside from the grammar how can i improve this scene? i feel it's much too blah. By the way this is a small part of the scene not the whole thing but i want to focus on just this bit.
With great force he held me down and got on top of me taking of his gray coat and unbuckling his pants. I tried...
I know you read sex scenes in novels sometimes. But the ones I have read just aren't romantic. And well. I have never written one before. I'm pretty sure it's different from writing just...normally. Can you give me some tip or something? Is really easy? Or hard? Thanks.
I am only in the sixth grade, so don't judge my vocabulary. If my vocab. is fine, just say so.
Here it is:
I opened the door to see Damien’s beautiful face. He grabbed me and held me to him. “Iris,” He said in a melodic tone. “I’ve missed you. I’m sorry I had to leave like that. I just had a...
...describe teh office or what lily is? wearing? Should I go into some details about how Lilys husband died? Here is the first scene from my novel:
Lily Andrews sighed as she gazed out at the dark grey rocky ocean as rain gently tapped Dr.Ellis' office window. Just another one of southern...
...describe teh office or what lily is? wearing? Should I go into some details about how Lilys husband died? Here is the first scene from my novel:
Lily Andrews sighed as she gazed out at the dark grey rocky ocean as rain gently tapped Dr.Ellis' office window. Just another one of southern...
...describe teh office or what lily is? wearing? Should I go into some details about how Lilys husband died? Here is the first scene from my novel:
Lily Andrews sighed as she gazed out at the dark grey rocky ocean as rain gently tapped Dr.Ellis' office window. Just another one of southern...
...describe teh office or what lily is? wearing? Should I go into some details about how Lilys husband died? Here is the first scene from my novel:
Lily Andrews sighed as she gazed out at the dark grey rocky ocean as rain gently tapped Dr.Ellis' office window. Just another one of southern...
...describe teh office or what lily is? wearing? Should I go into some details about how Lilys husband died? Here is the first scene from my novel:
Lily Andrews sighed as she gazed out at the dark grey rocky ocean as rain gently tapped Dr.Ellis' office window. Just another one of southern...
for those who havent heard of them, heres a couple of tracks from each
Five Deez - Decapitated Orgasms
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GYkvCkpv7kQ&a=_qoX98RHROs&playnext_from=ML
Blockhead - Farewell Spaceman
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Omq9_JTGeiw
Five Deez - Got Dough...
I don't remember the actor or what the movie was about but there was a scene I slightly remember..
Some guy was walking down the street in a city, then the camera pans down to his feet. He's still walking, then suddenly starts playing a hop-scotch game because there's a hop-scotch marking on...
I don't remember the actor or what the movie was about but there was a scene I slightly remember..
Some guy was walking down the street in a city, then the camera pans down to his feet. He's still walking, then suddenly starts playing a hop-scotch game because there's a hop-scotch marking on...
I need some links to sights that sell scene clothes online BUT not to expensive (most scene stores ive seen cost a bomb) i also need places for cool decent priced/cheap scene t shirts.
I have posted this question before as well, but didnt get a satisfactory answer. So i am posting this again.
I am an author and writing a thriller novel which is very interesting. I am at the middle of it and it is based on a woman whose family was killed by a man and she takes on revenge later...
Roger and Gina fantasize about being superheroes. They even dress the part as Gina wears a red leather skirt and boots and Roger wears a superman like custome. In this one, they track the villains to their hideout. After taking care of 2 thugs, a wall panel opens behind Gina and before Roger can...
something to ask you girls, cause i want to know how a certain actress would react to this circumstance. You see, my fave show, Power Rangers had an episode from the 2001 season where the pink ranger had an shot that got my attention. It just made me wonder if other fans also were able to see...