Please comment on my poem and critique it?

Please comment on my poem and critique it if you must. Also post your thoughts on what you think it is about.


The Trench fill with corpses
The Stench of Corp C fills the air
What is the Holy crusade about this time?
Is it going to last a decade?
Are they going to invade?
How’s this Unholy crusade sublime?
Will we need foreign aid?
Will we need to evade?
Is there Navel blockade working?
Will we need the blade for this one?
Is there going to be a parade later?