What do you think of my prologue?

PeachyKeen

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It was dark, and I was scared out of my wits. Nathan lay on the ground, his eyes closed. I stood face to face with the man I never wanted to see again.
"Go away!" I yelled.
"My, my. Some temper you have, wouldn't you say?" he walked around me, and my hands clenched into fists.
"What are you doing here?! I told you to NEVER come and see me again!" I screamed, my words echoing in the woods.
"You know I can't stay away from you, don't you?" he asked playfully, trying to get under my skin. He stood in front of me again, and tilted his head to the side. I pushed him, and he chuckled, only going a step back.
"Your no match for me. You asked Lidia to take away your powers. I can control you, but you can't control me." he said, smiling.
"Wrong move, pretty boy." I said, lunging at him, having more power than he ever knew.
 
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