prologue

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    Is this a good prologue for a book? Y/N w/ advice appreciated?

    Visit here to read, much appreciated: www.thelastmanstandingamnesia.weebly.com
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    How is this for a prologue to a book I plan to write?

    “Father, come quickly!!” The cry of the small boy could be heard through the quickly fading light that preceded the night. “Quickly father!” The rhythmic sound of heavy leather boots striking hard stone, worn smooth from years of use, washed over the child as he knelt over a small, motionless...
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    Comments/Critique on my prologue?

    It's on Wattpad - if you already have an account please comment on it on Wattpad, if not just give me an answer down in the answers bit! Thank you! http://www.wattpad.com/12029624-camp-403
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    How could I improve my Prologue?

    Do you know the phrase 'Be careful what you wish for? ' Well I should have gone with it when I had the chance. Honestly, who would ever imagine that I would be sitting tied to a chair with bruises and scratches all over my body? No one. Yes, thats right. No one. Being in a different...
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    Where can I download ( Leo Bersani, Homos, Prologue: "we" ) pdf?

    Leo Bersami Homos Prologue: "we" pdf or text doc download please
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    which three pilgrims did chaucer admire most in the prologue?

    I need this questioned answered for english, if you can help in anyways i'd appreciate it. i know the knight is one of them...
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    Does this prologue interest you? Do you want to read more? Any advice?

    She was running away, as far away as she could get. My eyes were locked on her, every movement, I observed, determining the right second to attack. This one was a strong one, I’ve been trying to bring her down for days now. But she just kept persevering, no matter what I threw her way. The girl...
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    Alternate prologue for my book?

    Alright, I was reading the original prologue to one of my books (Read it here: http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Alzw4QUDfAA4gdL2opxkXJ_ty6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20110130004923AA2OPK0) but I'm not quite sure I like it. So I decided to write an alternate. So here it is. Please tell me which one...
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    What do you think of my prologue?

    I know it needs some work, I be changing some things but I was wondering, does my draft sound good? What are some things that I could do to make it better? Clutching my legs, chin resting on knees, I looked up at the darkened sky. Full of clouds, but a shade of blue taught to trick people...
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    What do you think of my prologue?

    I know it needs some work, I be changing some things but I was wondering, does my draft sound good? What are some things that I could do to make it better? Clutching my legs, chin resting on knees, I looked up at the darkened sky. Full of clouds, but a shade of blue taught to trick people...
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    saints row 2 xbox 360 epilogue and prologue?

    so i have been playing saints row 2 and when i go to my clip board in my crib it says (Ronnin missions) (Sons of samide or something sorry aboute spelling) (brotherhood missions) and then i think it says epiologue and prologue can someone please tell me how to unlock the epilogue and prologue...
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    What do you think of this prologue to my sci-fi/fantasy book?

    Prologue It was about 14 years ago, the day everything started to go wrong. It was supposed to be perfect, but perfection isn’t everything, at least according to me. My parents think otherwise, though. But enough of that. It would’ve been in July. So let’s imagine that the suns shining down on...
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    Prologue by Arthur Miller to Death of a Salesman?

    Did Arthur Miller ever include an essay or some prologue about early 20th century culture to the play Death of a Salesman? I'm writing a paper on Gatsby and my English teacher felt my thesis reminded him of something like this, and recommended it as a possible source of ideas. But I'm...
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    Is my prologue interesting (10 points) please give me feed back, good or bad!?

    I had a secret… a secret that was beyond human understanding. To believe it, you had to think in a way that considered anything likely, even things that weren’t technically possible. I knew quite a lot about science: biology, physics, astrology… it was the most thought provoking subject. I...
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    What do you think of my prologue?

    It was dark, and I was scared out of my wits. Nathan lay on the ground, his eyes closed. I stood face to face with the man I never wanted to see again. "Go away!" I yelled. "My, my. Some temper you have, wouldn't you say?" he walked around me, and my hands clenched into fists. "What are you...
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    Hows this Prologue? wrote a while ago?

    "mommy!! I don' wanna gooo!" a little girl screamed clutching her moms legs. "Hellow, im Keanan!" a little boy says to the girl running up to her. "Hi! I’m Evangaline! but can cawll me Evan!" she says letting go of her moms legs looking him in the eyes. "okay! lets gow pway in the sandbox!"...
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    Gran Turismo 5 Prologue JPN JB PS3-Caravan

    Category: Console-PS3 Size: 5.42 GB Files: 67 (13 pars) Group: a.b.console.ps3 .NFO: View NFO Ext. Link: http://www.gran-turismo.com/jp/ Posted: Thu October 7th 09:48:51 UTC Download NZB
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    Does my prologue sound interesting?

    Darkness is impending. Whispers of a threat, of an unseen fear, make their way through the magical lands. I can feel it in the water. I can see the Woods are no longer as green. And the earth creaks and groans, an uncertain force upsetting its harmony. Much of the tranquility is lost, and none...
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    What do you think of my story so far? (prologue and first chapter)?

    So here's my story. Do you like the names? Does it fit her? Or is it sort of awkward since my name and the character both start with J? Does it resemble Pretty Little Liars too much? But the plot is different....thanks. no critism please, comments and advice always appreciated. :) A lot of...
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    For a cookbook, would the intro before be a prologue, introduction, prelude or...

    ...preface? self-explanatory ^^ just wondering what they're typically called, if an author decides to write about how they love to cook and what you'd expect in the cookbook before the actual book.
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