Rate My Bluegrass Rap Lyrics and Give Me Feedback?

Me1984

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I like to write lyrics every now and than, and this is a little Bluegrass rap I came up with awhile ago, so let me know what you think, and am I on the way to stardom?

Take that woman by the hand
Swing her around and show her the land
Hey you know your in the South
So throw your lips upon her mouth
Yeehaw, Swayback, Shake that

Come on gals let's get it wild
We can grind country style
Crank up the beat in my Jeep down by the Silo
Pull up a barrel of hay and my gals will put on a show
bump that rump to the barn flo'
Come on let's do-si-do
Me and my moves got my boo
When I'm in the pasture the cows go moo
This little farmer knows how to charm her
I'm a pimp with my strapped on spurs
i bring the longencks, and they say I'm a good caterer
The gals always come mudding with me and wanna get dirtier
but they won't seem to let me slap their dairier
They got rules, they know I how play
Maybe I will marry em' one day
Right now their only for display

Take that woman by the hand
Swing her around and show her the land
Hey, you know your in the South
So throw your lips upon her mouth
Yeehaw, sway back, shake that

We git on even in the corrals
I sit back and smoke some dorals
my gals treat me like I'm royale
I better drop the freakiness because some things they won't allow
I know my limitis because they seen me whip it
All I can do is watch them get lit, no touchin, and watch em' strip
I respect my gals, don't want to make them moody
They said they need an older man to get some smoochies
They're other women for that I can get juicy
In the meantime lets all just get loose
And we can all shake our caboose
The only way we know how to throw down
Is in a country town
We always ride VIP to a country scene
Cuz where we party is Luxury

Take that woman by the hand
Swing her around and show her the land
Hey, you know your in the South
So throw your lips upon her mouth
Yeehaw, sway back, shake that
 
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