i need help with my introduction, this is what i have so far?

[t#@Robby@#t]

What do you feel about smoking cigarettes? Well, how would you feel if i told you that there is about 4,000 chemicals in a cigarette smoke, which many are toxic.i need about 3 more sentences, and if there are some flaws please tell me

 

[tttttt:tSEXYGIRLt:tttttt]

How do you feel about smoking cigarettes? How would you feel if you discovered there were 4,000 chemicals, many of which are toxic, in a cigarette?

 

[ttJustPeachytt]

well you could continue with something like this...How would you feel if I told you smoking leads to cancer, ect. and that it contains harmful substances like rat poison*, ect. *I think rat poison is in cigarettes, if it isnt, put something that is =D

 

[tJBt]

ok......i agree with the first. BUT! with theirs and yours, DO NOT, start a sentence with "Well" AND, youre last sentence has a misplaced modifier.....so it should read, "How would you feel if I told you there are about 4,000 chemicals in a cigarette smoke, many of which are toxic." ps....the first reply sounds the best......