Critic my drawing and ideas, be brutally honest.?

Evance

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Hallo? ok just be "off with his head" type of critique. Im not good enough but im still practicing. see it quickly coz i will remove it from the net soon. Also please give me you opinions on these ideas for my graphic novel.
Ideas:
-Its an african timless story. Supernatural/Adventure/drama.
Age/Aging : 40s/50 yrs old chars look like teens and live like it. The oldest lived for 386yrs.
Technology: Mixed, mostly not advanced but the advanced ones are advanced in a traditional style.
Architecture: my own ideas with traditional styles.
and more..
im not good enough so i want tobcome better.
Characters:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/69394432@N04/8440357771/in/photostream
more drawings:
http://great-cutter.deviantart.com/
 
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