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[temari]

“Silent Cadence”

I see the love in your eyes, and...... I am...
Lost in its warm embrace, held captive,
Mesmerised by silent cadence....
Tranquil moments reflected...
In its brilliant brown hues,
Render me helpless.
I surrender...
To the one
That I...
Love.


Temari
The style of poem: Reversed Etheree

Much love and thanks, to all that commented!!

 

[tJellzt]

Lovely to see you have your muse working again Temari!
I was only thinking about that today...please keep sharing with us.

 

[MalteseBreeder]

Love your poem,very meaningful very sensitive and sweet! Not too thrilled with your title, but that is just my opinion, maybe would have called it something else!
Maybe
Tranquility of Silence
Tranquility Embers

Something as pretty as your poem, your title is OK, just to me could be better, hope you don't mind me commenting! Cheers !!

Had to make another comment on your truly beautiful poem, just so lovely and really never read a poem that you can read it from bottom to top, and the usual way top to bottom and it still makes the same sense , oh yes I love it!!!!

Oh my King of Biscuits, another very beautiful poem by you this time!! Cheers!!

 

[RazorBladeLove93]

i really like this one