I'm sorry it's more than one sentence. Plz help me still, I want it to seem like Alicia is having food with her family. She over eats on accident. If u think it's choppy plz tell me where and what I can do to change it.
Alicia wanted to sleep at the table, she felt like she ate a whole turkey...
Something about this sounds... clunky? I'm not sure how to rewrite it, though. Any help would be really appreciated. Thanks!
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Gays and Lesbian? If America is a true Christian country with churches that teach and children about believing in Christ. Why can't we rewrite the Bible after the appearance of gays in a country that claims to have equality.
I am working on a story right now and I like some Ideas but I do not like others. I tried to think of how to fix it but I don't know how. How can I learn how to fix my plot like this? I want to know how inspiration can come to me.
Sometimes I don't like the way a story goes. I rebuild it and forget which version is real.
Like in Terry Goodkind's "Sword of Truth" series. I don't like the use of only male gods. In my mind I rewrote the Creator god as female and kept the Destroyer god (called Keeper) as male.
In Sarah...
specifically Tom Osbourne? Two points. One, since the Bo Pelini thing came out(OMG he yelled), everyone points to the class act that was Tom Osbourne. Do people remember Christian Peter? The guy was a sexual predator, and his big discipline was holding him out of a game. An Exhibition game...
denying that Nazis were Christians? My feeling as a Christian points me to my Lord and Savior as a fighter. It points me to the man who once in loneliness, surrounded only by a few followers, recognized these Jews for what they were and summoned men to fight against them and who, God's truth...
I have something on there now that I want to replace with something else. I went to E-How and they said to go to File > Erase DVD, but I don't see that option. I went to explore and found the files on the DVD so can I just erase it manually? I tried to format it, but it said the disk is write...
Whenever I put in a DVD or CD, whether it is RW or just R, Windows always gives me the option to treat it like a flash drive with a "live filesystem" or like an audio CD for a radio and give it a "mastered filesystem". So my question is can it be a live filesystem and be erasable and reusable...
How many times have you rewritten your work before publishing? Is is normal to rewrite? I have a rough draft and plan on rewriting to make as good as I can get it.
so i burned some games onto my verbatim discs for Xbox 360 but i screwed some of them up, and I don't want the other games..
So is there any way to rewrite them or delete the data from the discs?? I tried to format it and it didn't work, it said "Disk is write protected" and i'm using IMGburn...
What is the appropriate amount of time to allow before Hollywood will do movies glorifying people like Sara Jane Olson?
Since the 60's and 70's, far leftists learned their hatred to our soldiers was a BIG mistake, they spit on our soldiers returning from Viet Nam (literally and figuratively)...
I really like my Mozilla Firefox already, but if I wanted to customize it to my own liking by adding certain features, could I do that? How would I go about such a thing? I'm currently learning C and Java, what additional languages would I need to master?