dialogue

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    Do fairytales have dialogue?

    Do fairytales such as Cinderella, Snow White, the Little Mermaid etc. have dialogues? Do they have lots of dialogue or just a bit? Thanks in advance! I am writing up my own fairytale with a twist for school.
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    dialogue writing between mother and child about spending vacations?

    Mother: Vacations are not about sleeping late and watching TV all day… You can take up photography, learn an instrument, learn judo… Son/daughter: I really worked hard for my exam, I do want to rest. Dialogues should be taking atleast 10 turns each.
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    How do I shorten dialogue usage?

    I am writing a book and the main characters are a father and a son, so I need there to be dialogue between them to develop a relationship. I have descriptive scenes and whatnot but the dialogue is crucial, however I feel as though I may have used too much/may be using too much. Any ideas on how...
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    Story dialogue construction comma help?

    I am having some doubts about comma and period usage when working around dialogue in writing. So here are some examples with different versions of each. Tell me which appear correct please? EXAMPLE 1: words words words, "more words here," she/he said. words words words "more words here"...
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    Is this an actual Beavis & Butt-head dialogue?

    For the hard core Beavis and Butt-head fans, is this an actual conversation or not? Butt-head: Hey Beavis, remember when they caught you jacking off in public? Beavis: Oh yeah. Heh heh mm heh. Butt-head: And the cops arrested you for indecent exposure. On either the older episodes(200) or...
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    what is most dialogue of witchblade?

    do you have any idea of fighting dialogue of masane amaha on witchblade? can you please help? =))
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    masane amaha dialogue in witchblade. during her fight?

    yeah. i am asking what is masane amaha dialogue. when she's on the fight.
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    An interesting dialogue relating to topic "Mystery" ?

    Well, I am preparing a program for my English Club, and I've got to look for a dialogue with content relating to topic "Mystery". I don't have any ideas. If you know st like that, plz help me. Any (interesting or funny) dialogues relating mystery like ghost, supernatural, alien, monster...could...
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    Fiction writing question-using dialogue.?

    I am writing a short fiction in the 3rd person, it starts off as all descriptive details about the scene and no dialogue because of there being only one person. My question is: is it acceptable to use character dialogie as a device to explain plot points and other things that an omniscient...
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    Is this dialogue too formal?

    Basically, whenever I write (and talk) I can't help but talk like I've swallowed a dictionary. I've been like it since I was a little kid, and yes, at times it's beneficial in some situations, but if I'm trying to write realistically, my characters sound so posh, even though according to the...
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    How to write dialogue with one character speaking over another?

    So I have two characters having a conversation where they pretty much carry on their own conversations on top of one another, how exactly would I go about formatting this? It seems too long to continue saying "He interjected" or "He interrupted". Any other ideas :)?
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    Dialogue needed and more improvements!?

    My two protagonist's first meet in the girls house. It's late at night and she goes into her study she walks around a little studying the books on the shelves when she notices one is missing. she wanders back to the door when she hears a boy talking. she turns around to see him sitting near...
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    Home theater dialogue sound problem?

    I am having a wee bit of a problem with my home theater dialogue. Ill start off with my setup. I have a denon avr 1910 receiver and it has the audyssey mic (self setting mic) so i know i have the distance right one of the main reasons i got the receiver. For speakers i have cerwin vega xls...
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    When I double click any item , it automatically gets deleted or the dialogue box

    pops up, do u surely want to? I am using compaq c754tu laptop, xp , whenever I double click any icon , dialogue box pops up, do you want to send the item to the recycle bin. I tried a lot , but hopeless , pls. help. thanks in advance i have synaptics installed
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    i'm looking for a dialogue about people being afraid to love. anyone know this?

    i came across it from tumblr and it was between kat and achelon or something. and i remember something like and "why wouldn't people be afraid of love.." .
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    where can I buy Dragon Ball Z in English with original dialogue?

    I want to buy all of the seasons of Dragon Ball Z with all of the swearing and blood that the original Japanese version has, but in English, so I guess that means the original English dubbing. I don't mind if some wording is changed, if it is because the translation doesn't make sense. But an...
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    Do you think my dialogue sounds dull? I want it to sound touching :(?

    (if I have something wrong please tell me where and why) ** (In my novel the whole thing is mostly about Jen and her on again off again relationship with a forbidden boy. She dates him even though he is dating her best friend) ** * *"I never thought I could love someone so much that I would...
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    Fallout 3 Crash - random interactive dialogue?

    I've been having a problem with Fallout 3 for quite some time now, and with a bit of research I found what was most likely causing it: ------- Fallout 3 Installer installs a non Plug’n Play DRM device manager (not driver but a manager) that doesn’t like any 3rd party codecs (ie K-Lite, WinAMP...
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    B&A: Shall we play a dialogue scavenger hunt? +BQ's, of course?

    Hello, B&Aers! This is a little dialogue scavenger hunt. Basically, I'll ask you to find a spoken line in *your* story which fits the criteria-whatsit below. Find for me: 1) A line of dialogue in which a character introduces him/herself. 2) A passage of dialogue (more than one line) with two...
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    What are some good movie dialogue scenes?

    CRITERIA: must be between a male and female character limited to two roles at least five minutes long a movie that was never previously a stage show/play/musical a movie that was never made into a stage show/play/musical thank you!
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