I started on a diet and exercise program to lose weight recently but I think I may be doing it wrong. Typically my diet per day is 3 eggs and 4 sausages in the morning, at about 9 or 10. I usually don't eat until dinner, but occasionally I'll bring some nuts into college for energy or buy one...
The idea of a soul was borrowed from earlier religion, doesn't mean it's more false or true. Just means that the people who practice the religion share common belief with those who believe in a soul.
Wow. That's all I can say!!! Are you writing this to apply to a college? Because, if all your paragraphs are like this, I would most definitely NOT be accepting you.
I agree with the above statement about the run-on sentences. Next, you never use ... in a professional and formal essay.
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