What do you think of this rap I wrote?

[Roy]

I'm Israeli asshole.

[ClockCleaner]

They say that Life is a test ..I guess only the God knows

How long will I be living...what to do when I go

I turned on CNN ...looked what it had to say

Stupid Israeli people raiding Gaza today

I saw a screaming face as I watched a kids blood

Stepped back and asked myself "now this kid dun did what?

Life is about money...fast cars, and clothes...

Every lady wants money ..every guy wants a hoe

I'm walking in my path too..my motto is getting mine

I always wonder will I still kneel down and pray when I shine

But all around the world we going through tough times

I guess this is the end of this rhyme....

Pray for Gaza.....
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