Updated Song - Comments Welcome?

[TheBro]

She's sitting over there
I hate it when she's all alone
brushing away the tears with her hair
What have I done?
All these years I've spent rebelling
all the actions and things I've said
denying what I've become
She keeps asking me why
I feel like giving up
I no longer feel the need to try

I feel like I'm dying inside
every day starts with me trying not to cry
I want to change,
this pain I want to hide
How do I find the real man that's somewhere inside

I'll be the real man that I need to be
When my hands are in the air
When I'm begging forgiveness
When I'm down on one knee
When I'm no longer what I was
When I see the light at the end of the tunnel and darkness is gone

When you tell me you love me just because


How do I stop being this way
So there's no more reaching in the dark
stuck here alone and clawing for hope
i want out of this life's Jail
no more struggling alone,
no more living this isolated hell

[Inay]

Nice poem...seeking for lover not yet found.......well good luck for you...happy searching for the dream lover....

[Britinaynaynaynay]

that is a great song, about wanting love but not having it. good. =)