do you guys like this love rap?

ok. i've been writing to this rap to a girl in which i admired. her feedback is that she really loves it and that she feels flattered. i just want to spread to word by showing this rap to you guys.

Girl, you need no collagen, I know your smart within
Artisans shape your body and your heart strong like Spartacan
Plus your not an itsy bitsy load, your pretty and bold
Giving trees and electric poles to eccentric cities that's old
I'm like Japan, being hit by this bombshell, I kamikaze
Like World War Two, trying to go towards you surprisingly
I'm trying to go adjacent to give the pics I taken
But that won't work cause I think my face is pixilated
It looks wack, I know, if I had a cappuccino
In the pic, I would look more like Leonardo Dicaprio
I'll just sing to this girl that I really admired
At thing that is cliché like I'm king of the world
Medically, you age less magically from my song remedy
It's the fountain of youth, it sends to shoot for longevity
Being one ageless person, the truth of my words is contagious
Cause my love is a epidemic stage of pandemic rage
My head get high like balloons when I'm alone with you
Seeing your vibrant colors and the smell of cologne and perfume
I just want to mention yo face which is incredible
Did god use a ruler to draw your face which is symmetrical
And my mind triggers that I don't want to shower fast
Cause I don't want sand to go away from your hourglass
When I see you, I write from a far, you're a light that's bizarre
Your almighty power is far which is brighter than a star
I hope this show won't end, you mind won't condescend
I'll wake you up like a yawn from an Indian with moccasins
Because my lyrical is mystical cause it sticks to you
In school where we combine with despicable liquid glue
I would do anything just to keep you entertain
Since were both stars, our friend or loveship will enter fame
See girl, I'm a nice dude with the right mood to entice you
My advice to you is that I should fight you for your title