How do you describe a romantic love scene (for a novel)? PLEASE HELP!?

Stella

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the scene goes like this:

the guy enters the girl's room as she finishes playing the piano. after he comments on her brilliant playing as usual, she then tells him that she wants to be with him even for just one night and wanted to be his wife. the guy is shocked by her words that he kneels down in front of her and confesses that he isn't as strong as the Titans, doesn't have the hooves of a satyr, or status or wealth to offer her. she then tells him that he was the one who always supported her throughout everything and was always there for her. he approaches her from behind and holds her, but she feels scared that she pushes him away but her grabs her by the wrist and says that he can't wait any longer bec he's waited for too long already, then he tells her to not be afraid. she eventually say's "I'll be your wife". he carries her to the bed and removes his shirt and kisses her. (please help describe the emotion like blood boiling etc...). after their passionate moment, they wake up from their sleep, the guy kisses her once more, and the girl declares in her thoughts that the guy is now her husband.
 
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