This is a 'song' that I wrote (well if you can and/or will call it a song) I'd really like to get some feedback on this one so please comment. Thanks & I hope you like it. Oh and by the way some parts are in Spanish. Here it is:
If you were here by my side right now
I would cherish this moment
if you were by my side forever
I would love life til the day I die
if I could see the grace in your eyes right now
than I know your eyes will be my window to see
into heaven and be at peace for eternity
peace is what I call when we are together
it is when we can be in each others arms
and know that nothing can destroy the love we share
this peace means the world to me
you mean the world to me
without you my world would crash
without you my life is a joke
every time I close my eyes
you just invade my mind
this is no WWF invasion
this is real and as pure as it gets
so baby girl just sit back and know how real love feels
(chorus 1)
Real love is when you can't get them out your mind
real love is when you know they're your medicine to survive
I hope you know my love for you is very real
girl I know you've been hurt many times before
those scars and wounds have destroyed your heart into pieces
but I will pick up those pieces and help you re-attach your heart
because real love is a helping hand
(chorus 2)
Mi mujer preciosa
que podre hacer para que sientas
el amor real que siento por ti?
You know my love for you is oh so real (te amo mucho)
all of my life I've searched for you (al fin te encontre)
and now god has put you before me (gracias a ti señor)
because He knows there is noone else to show you this real love (este amor es real)
(end of chorus 2)
All I ever wanted was to be with someone like you (alguien como tu)
there is nothing in this world I wouldn't do for you (no hay nada que no hare por ti)
you are my reason for living (es por ti que tengo vida)
which is why this song I'd dedicated to you (es por ti mi amor)
being with you feels like I'm in heaven
so if anyone asks me what it's like in gods paradise
I will tell them it's more than amazing to be there
because I am by the side of my angel baby (tu eres mi angel)
(chorus 1)
(chorus 2)
Baby girl when I met you you gave me your smile
your smile made me fly
mamacita eres la Reina de mi vida (you're the queen of my life)
yo soy el Rey de la tuya (I am your king)
mi Reina te regalo mi vida (I give you my life)
mi corazon es todo para ti (my heart is all for you)
porque te amo con todas las fuerzas del corazon (I love you with all my heart)
my heart belongs to my queen
every morning I wish I can wake up next to you
knowing you will never leave me
todos Los Dias pienso en besarte (I think of kissing you)
I want to run away with you forever
this real love I wanna show you
I love you my queen
so let me show you this real love
(chorus 1)
(chorus 2)
If you were here by my side right now
I would cherish this moment
if you were by my side forever
I would love life til the day I die
if I could see the grace in your eyes right now
than I know your eyes will be my window to see
into heaven and be at peace for eternity
peace is what I call when we are together
it is when we can be in each others arms
and know that nothing can destroy the love we share
this peace means the world to me
you mean the world to me
without you my world would crash
without you my life is a joke
every time I close my eyes
you just invade my mind
this is no WWF invasion
this is real and as pure as it gets
so baby girl just sit back and know how real love feels
(chorus 1)
Real love is when you can't get them out your mind
real love is when you know they're your medicine to survive
I hope you know my love for you is very real
girl I know you've been hurt many times before
those scars and wounds have destroyed your heart into pieces
but I will pick up those pieces and help you re-attach your heart
because real love is a helping hand
(chorus 2)
Mi mujer preciosa
que podre hacer para que sientas
el amor real que siento por ti?
You know my love for you is oh so real (te amo mucho)
all of my life I've searched for you (al fin te encontre)
and now god has put you before me (gracias a ti señor)
because He knows there is noone else to show you this real love (este amor es real)
(end of chorus 2)
All I ever wanted was to be with someone like you (alguien como tu)
there is nothing in this world I wouldn't do for you (no hay nada que no hare por ti)
you are my reason for living (es por ti que tengo vida)
which is why this song I'd dedicated to you (es por ti mi amor)
being with you feels like I'm in heaven
so if anyone asks me what it's like in gods paradise
I will tell them it's more than amazing to be there
because I am by the side of my angel baby (tu eres mi angel)
(chorus 1)
(chorus 2)
Baby girl when I met you you gave me your smile
your smile made me fly
mamacita eres la Reina de mi vida (you're the queen of my life)
yo soy el Rey de la tuya (I am your king)
mi Reina te regalo mi vida (I give you my life)
mi corazon es todo para ti (my heart is all for you)
porque te amo con todas las fuerzas del corazon (I love you with all my heart)
my heart belongs to my queen
every morning I wish I can wake up next to you
knowing you will never leave me
todos Los Dias pienso en besarte (I think of kissing you)
I want to run away with you forever
this real love I wanna show you
I love you my queen
so let me show you this real love
(chorus 1)
(chorus 2)