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    May I lay this offering at the alter of Y!A opinion?

    ***** The dream unfolds like escalator steps, each a mobile platform until they collapse, one into the other, disappearing at the knife edge. Landings seem to approach, the idea of stability tantalizing, yet again, the steel stairway dematerializes. Forcing against the tide, steps taken...
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    Does this poem offer a morning greeting?

    This is nice. I hope that everyone who really hates a cheery disposition and positive outlook will leave it alone, but this place is filled with Yakasses!
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    Does this poem offer a morning greeting?

    This is nice. I hope that everyone who really hates a cheery disposition and positive outlook will leave it alone, but this place is filled with Yakasses!
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    How about a short trip on.........?

    Very good, seamless...
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    My Creative Writing teacher forces us to compose rap poetry, but I think it's poor

    Butt, soft! What! Light! Broke my window! East, son! What up Julie! Sun up! You can take it from here. I'll put more Shakespeare in the details.
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    What is there for a jobless poet to do than to dream?

    The one word I didn't like was 'significantly.' It seemed too hard. The rest was nice and soft. Good to be back.
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    A question for all the contributing authors: Go back in time and invite one poet to

    be in your book? Edna St. Vincent Millay ***** Make Bright The Arrows by Edna St. Vincent Millay "Make bright the arrows Gather the shields: Conquest narrows The peaceful fields. Stock well the quiver With arrows bright: The bowman feared Need never fight. Make bright the arrows, O...
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    Which of these is your "IF"?

    ***** If by E.E. Cummings If freckles were lovely, and day was night, And measles were nice and a lie warn't a lie, Life would be delight,- But things couldn't go right For in such a sad plight I wouldn't be I. If earth was heaven, and now was hence, And past was present...
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    Is "Open Form" now the recognized term for what we used to call "Free Verse"?

    Is "Open Form" now the recognized term for what we used to call "Free Verse"? ***** STUDIFIED JONES by TD Euwaite To have a full set of teeth again, like back when I could bite a #2 Ticonderoga in half, Unspent paper was the wasted, loose leaf, ream sized binders full, Chewed to pulp for...
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    Have you time for three lines?

    I was a poignant hominid once.
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    Are you real or imaginary, in the here and now, if the Internet has two of those...?

    Is your bio you, or somebody you want to be? I could not open the link. I have not read either book. I have read the Federalist Papers and the Communist Manifesto.
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    Do you like this poem I wrote down?

    ***** FINAL PLACE SANS RESTING I’ve been set free from the sorrow and pain, from the shackles and chains, in the ground I’ve been laid, I’ve no more fight for ropes and restraints, for the frowns and complaints, or the guilty mistakes I’ve no more rhyme in words that atone, it’s here I roam...
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    A Con verb or not...or am I on the wrong track?

    I think it more of a tube than a bulb.
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    Do you like my poem?

    ***** DR LOCTOR FEARS THAT THE MACHINE MAY BE TOO FRIENDLY Bring my eye closer to the sightglass. Let me peer into the machineworks so I may see that the lubricants are effective. Bring my ear next to the casing. Let me listen to the pulsing rhythm so I may hear that the wheels are in balance...
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    Silver Bells is Back with a Song. Do You Like It?

    We are World-Wide. Still, my favorite up-and-coming artist.
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