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    Does this sound like an interesting book?

    Interesting to say the least....
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    What should I write a book about?

    I will tell you what I tell every other person who comes on here looking for story ideas: Come up with the idea on your own. No story you could ever possible write would ever be as good as one that you make up on your own. All other "incepted" ideas, if you will, do not develop completely and...
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    I need help with my introduction please help!?

    You can't ever expect to be a successful writer if you want others to write stuff for you. I think it's fine. Once you're done with your little novel you can revise it and pore over the smaller details. That's what writing's about. Just keep on moving because the momentum of wanting to write...
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    TEENS: Would you read this story?

    I think one word really sums up this idea: overdone. It's just that, overdone. Unless it will blow all of the other similar books out of the water or you think it is different enough to even get published, then don't go for it. Maybe you can change it around a little, but to me it all seems too...
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    Help with ending for my book?

    Hi all, you may or may not have seen a few posts regarding the post-apocalyptic nuclear disaster book I am writing. I'm using the snowflake method and have come to the point where I need to make a synopsis. Basically, I have two options for the ending a) The main character's wife can end up...
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    Opinions on this introduction/ first chapter to my story?

    ...what's the point? The plot? It seems too informational, there's no hook.
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    FiOS has bad speeds?

    Ok, I just got FiOs (or however you spell it) and it says that i got the 15 mb/s download and 2 mb/s upload connection. However, when I go to download something or test my connection, etc., I only get 1.8 mb/s download and 100 kb/s upload. What the heck? Can someone tell me why this is? um...what?
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