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    "Beautiful Thorn"....Does the heart deserve to suffer?

    for every smile
    a fissure forms
    with each kiss
    new stains appear
    morning after thoughts
    frighten the future

    Love
    caustic from the start
    now pushes to swallow
    theirs is safe
    to them the blade dulls
    as each hour blends them

    they are wrong
    in all the right ways

    such comfort from the pain
    leaving tears upon the ashes
    each aware of the debris

    this rose has beauty
    in every thorn

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    I love the last 2 lines. Perfect ending.

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    I love the last 2 lines. Perfect ending.


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