Do you like this poem?

[lizardmomma]

Isolation

The emptiness is trying to consume me once more.
All of my self-esteem…gone.

Vanished into the night
To leave me bewildered and insecure.

Not understanding the why,
And barely the how of what I feel.

The self-imposed isolation that keeps me,
Me.
I don’t like it,
But, I don’t know how not to be this way.
I try not to be too awkward when I’m out,
But when it comes down to it,
I’d rather be alone.

No,
That’s not right…
I’d rather be with my love.

But he is the flame everyone is drawn to.

Oh, what did I do?

But, what everyone doesn’t know is
That if it weren’t for me
That flame wouldn’t burn at all.

So is the isolation worth it?

[coldhearted]

shit bra i like it

[xPSYCHOx]

yeah its pretty good....read my poem.....http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AlBKCLWxz06Timzn0YpNm2Tty6IX;_ylv=3?qid =20081114205901AAkEnYV

[xMurderousMayhemx]

It's got vision, I think it's pretty good! Keep writing and you will only get better

[Sherry]

i love this poem soo much...you are really talented
keep doin what your doin girrllll

[SandraO]

Nice!

[BuTtErfLy]

its cool

[tia]

this is good poem but u should use similes in it & should convey the menings of word in the poem & centered para should be more concenterated but its a excelent poem!


u must have copied it bcoz no one can write such a good poem i mean it really!

[kissez]

not really.

[mgr47]

Well done!