I wrote a poem, honest opinion please. It's called "Little Things"?

[tilldawg1410]

Really good visuals, but if you put in a few dashes or periods or something to give the reader to breath (dramatical pauses) it would be even better. But hey, I'm in 10th grade. I don't know everything about improving poetry

[Loves_To_Pierce]

love it

[Liz]

i like it a lot... it gives you visual pictures

[Bayle Alyesse]

I like it =)

[Mithila M]

It's a very delicate poem.
And yes, the vocab is gorgeous.
Don't forget to keep the writing on the same level and tone.
if you know what I mean
Good job mate.

[chocoholic630]

One word... Amazing! It is very catchy and is sure to catch anyone's attention! Keep up that poetic mind! Best of Luck!

[Dragon Prince]

Bravo Bravo, encore please. That was brilliant to read and magnificent to understand. Very well written I love it, please post more like this.

Thank you for the poem and all the best.

[ninja_pandabear]

wow thats pretty good, lol i like it.

[Asianeyes1624]

It was very interesting, I like it!!!! It makes you think when you read it. Keep writing

[SOTONG KING]

omg it was really nice - you sure have a nack for writing poems :]