Okay, I wrote bits and pieces of a story, but I want some feedback. Can you help me?

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I wrote parts of a story, but I want some feedback. Can you PLEASE read my story? And please don't write rude comments. But I would like your opinion... Go here:
http://abbie-angel14.livejournal.com/671.html
And I know I got some words spelled wrong, so please don't mention it.
 
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