Opinions on my poem?

[Chad]

Here's a poem I wrote.

I'm just dry brush, and you're the 12 year old child. You say it was an accident, but why did you smile?

[Gerard K]

cute; Robert Frost wrote some two line poems.

[I'm_not_dead_yet.]

torture and chaos.

[Dis Dain]

Sounds perverted to me.

[flag_tag88]

interesting. sounds like someone did something, claimed it was an accident but you knew better b/c they smiled.