Please Rate my YUGIOH deck out of 10?

[Max Power]

I've had this deck for a while and I've taken it to local tournaments and it's been really successful, But I want to know whether or not it would do well in a regional event.

Monster - 21

3x Raiza the Storm Monarch
2x Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch
1x Zaborg the Thunder Monarch
2x Cyber Dragon
1x Jinzo
1x E-Hero Stratos
2x D-Hero Malicious
1x D-Hero Disk Commander
1x D-Hero Fear Monger
1x Marshmallon
1x Card Trooper
1x Treeborn Frog
1x Snipe Hunter
1x Breaker the Magical Warrior
1x Sangan
1x Mystic Tomato

Spells - 12

2x Destiny Draw
1x Scapegoat
1x Brain Control
2x Lightning Vortex
1x Reinforcement of the Army
1x Pot of Avarice

1x Heavy Storm
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Premature Burial
1x Smashing Ground

Traps - 7

1x Mirror Force
1x Torrential Tribute
3x Phoenix Wing Wind Blast
1x The Transmigration Prophecy
1x Call of the Haunted

[Yugioh Doc]

your deck is great but i dont like it that you have put a marshmellon in your deck without his glasses and in your traps you dont have a magic cylinder.
Play Hard and Play Fair

[Yugioh Doc]

o and i rate it 8.5 out of 10

[Unregistered]

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[Unregistered]

thats cool: tell me what u think of my ultimate undefeated deck i call: warrior's fury

cybertech alligator x1
elemental hero burstinatrix x2
elemental hero sparkman x2
elemental hero clayman x1
elemental hero avian x1
powered tuner x1
speed warrior x1
mid shield gardna x1
Road synchron x1
quilbolt hedgehog x1
junk synchron x1
* (3rd fav card is) Destiny hero Dasher x1
Elemental hero Neos x1
Black luster soldier (4th favorite) x1
elemental hero wildheart x1
x-saber anu pirahna x1
x-saber galahad x1
obnoxious celtic gaurdian x1
swift gaia the fierce knight
x-saber airbellum x1
sasuke samurai x1



synchro/fusion
Road Warrior
Junk Warrior
X-saber Urbellum
Elemental hero thunder giant

spells

tribute to the doomed x1
monster reborn x1
twister x1
the warrior returning alive x3
de-synchro x1
synchro boost x1
swords of revealing light x1
emergency provisions x1
ookazi x1
giant trunade x1

so far, i know this deck has issues, but check this out:

Traps:

Widespread ruin x1
Dust Tornado x1
disappear x1
Draining shield x2
backup soldier x1
Gottom's emergency call x1
Solar ray x1
limit reverse x1



my star card in this deck is my junk warrior, followed by road warrior then dasher etc.

[Unregistered]

monsters 16
3x dark magician
3x dark magician girl
3x magicians valkyria
3x skilled dark magician
2x breaker the magical warrior
1x kuriboh
1x old vindictive magician

spells 12
3x dark magic curtain
3x thousand knives
3x sages stone
1x mystical space typhoon
1x swords of revealing light
1x heavy storm

traps 12
3x magicians circle
2x jar of greed
1x seven tools of the bandit
1x magic jammer
1x magic cylinder
1x torrential tribute
1x mirror force
1x spellbinding circle
1x call of the haunted

[Unregistered]

rate my deck out of 10

monsters

1x Blue Eyes White Dragon
1x Armed Dragon Lv. 3
1x Armed Dragon Lv. 5
1x Armed Dragon Lv. 7
1x Armed Dragon Lv. 10
3x Summon Skull
1x Simorgh, Bird of Divinity
1x Wind Effigy
1x Bitelon
1x Deep Diver
1x Crystal Beast Topaz Tiger
1x Metal Armored Bug
1x Kaiser Sea Horse
1x Lord of Dragon
1x Dream Sprite
1x Old Vindictive Magician
1x 8-Claw Scorpion
1x The Calculater
1x Ancient Crimson Ape
1x Jigen Bakudan
1x Gorz The Emissary of Darkness
1x Gigantic Cephalotus
1x Iron Chain Snake
1x Earth Effigy
1x Man-Eater Bug
1x Revival Jam
1x Dark Magican
1x Sorcerer of Dark Magic

Spell Cards

1x Light Vortex
1x Burden of The Mighty
1x Axe of Despair
1x Soul Exchange
1x Delta Attacker
1x Inferno Tempest
1x Big Bang Shot
1x Fires of Doomsday

Trap Cards

1x Trap Hole
1x Jam Defender
1x Blasting The Ruins
2x Enchanted Javelin
1x Dimensional Prison
1x Solemn Wishes
1x Slip of Fortune
1x Embodiment of Apophis
1x Ultimate Offering
1x Just Desserts
1x Jar of Greed

[Unregistered]

monsters
3x blue eyes white dragon
1x dark magician girl
2x dark magician
1x winged dragon of rah
1x slypha the sky dragon
1x obelisk the tormentor
1x gate guardian

[Unregistered]

here it is:



Monsters:Jinzo,Blue eyes white

[YugiYukiYusei]

I want someone to rate my deck. I have designed deck after deck after deck on my computer. I think that they are very good. I recently designed a new deck I want to be my main deck. I will buy it card by card soon. I think it may be a really good one. It's simple but strategic and powerful. but I want someone else to tell me if it's a stronge enough deck. However I'm not going to post it because I don't want someone to steal my deck. If anyone knows where I can get a rating in Private. Thank you.