Did your poem get sick after riding the Scrambler?

[TDEuwaite™]

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The Carnival Ride
by TD Euwiate

Auntie laughs at the ticket window.
She mumbles a little…
“Illusions cost $5,
Deceptions are free.”

The lemonade vendor has a long line
because Auntie says citron flavor
is easy to imitate.

I want to ride the one that goes
all the way upside down. Auntie’s flask
freshens he lemonade; now she will ride

with me on that one.

Auntie looks a little green…

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It is spell chick's fault. She won't lift a word's skirt to check.
Yes...and now I will go operate the chainsaw...

[Reenie:MomofMarine]

If memory serves I'm playing Auntie and when my flask is freshened I'd like to go sit over there and listen to the oldies band...I don't like to go upside down no more.

*Now go look at my picture, please.

[ElaineP]

Gimme some of that lemonade.

[neonman]

Have you been nipping? freshens he lemonade?