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    A Poem - A Quiet Scream - Do You Like?

    With shoulders square and head erect
    He walks proudly for all to see
    There's a pain others don't detect
    Yet he smiles and acts cordially

    He carries his burden all alone
    To share would upset loved ones
    A quiet scream has set up home
    Yet he laughs, jokes, and feigns fun

    He dons a mask to hide sadness
    And acts brave in a scary land
    Deciding to never confess
    Yet dares one who understands

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    i liked it, especially the last two lines, they were good


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