I'm not really into poetry, i'm trying to write a poem for my Bf can someone...

...give me some help? thanks xxx I love your smile and everything you say and do,
I love your laugh
and the way you so carefully take care of my heart too,
I can't believe you've made me strong enough to say
"I love you"
and to make all this real,
It is really much more than words to me
It's me putting myself out there,
open to rejection and being let down,
Leaving myself wide open to that dreaded frown,
I wish I could stay in this moment forever
here with you,
Because this time I will believe everthing, everything you'll say and do.
(Help me out coz I'm really bad at trying to project my feeling in any way what so ever lol, I need help as you can see lol)
Thanx

thats good u wrote it thats reely good its the best!

PS: its perfect for ur bf he'll love it trust mee

thats a really good poem!!! i wrote a poem for my bf in the paper on valentines day it went like this
everytime im with you i never want to leave you.
everytime im crying its because how much i miss you.
everytime i close my eyes all i see is you.
so everytime my heart beats know it beats for you!
it may not help but i hope it inspires you

well done summer,a star on the way.