Pls rate my articles ! how do they look ? (read on!)?

Okay, so I wanna write a book..
Schools over and there's time before college.

I've done a ton of research...and a lot more stuff.
I know what it takes. Trust me

Getting to the point.
I just want some practice before starting , so I opened up a blog and am publishing a few articles. The link is down below.

Pls Shower me some constructive suggestions.
What can I do to improve ?
What part you liked particularly?
What part you didn't ?
Any factual or grammatical errors...pls point em out !
It's not that big, pls read it and rate how much marks would you give it out of 10 ?


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http://xeustwd.blogspot.in/
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If you think I'm doing this for pageviews... There's not even adsense on there , I'm only 18..

Pls help me out !
thnx !