Will you C/C a new script {Bronze fog bell} of the Greek poet?

Dec 2, 2012
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Bronze fog bell

Acclaimed invite - the bronze fog bell,
in mid damp air, black was the ship,
revengeful diktat and dark spell,
the ghost ship floats to send its knell
(dimensions odd - vectors of wield),
attract to ship where doors are sealed,
false worlds invite with dusk's befall,
doomed spell avers my crimson spilled.

The nimbus deign and winds beseech,
sea men confreres; as night darkens,
lost ghosts from depths attempt to reach,
the trips to ports that minds bewitch,
denounced their scopes and goals ardened,
my soul will flirt with truths discord'nt,
the drops of red the clouds besiege,
ship's descant curse of Had's accordm'nt

© Giorgio Veneto 11-30-2012, All Rights Reserved
(An Iambic tetrameter poem, with ABAABBAB CDCCDDCD rhyme scheme.)

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Answer ONLY if you are NOT under the influence of Absinthe liquor.
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20120815090405AALv05j
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...and ONLY if you are NOT a person with 100s of accounts. But if you wish to challenge me, I 'll be more than glad to confront your MAIN account! Hope I was clear. Dig?
Do you want to challenge me Absinthe-Andrew? Do you feel lucky lucky lucky?
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AkiIN3tD8NOnZepf6Zc7ZJSn5HNG;_ylv=3?qid=20121130203624AAto4cz
Your usage of English is Superb, Absinthe-Andrew. Please challenge me! :)
Absinthe-Andrew was dreaming of "Poolitzer" (or was it Wurlitzer?) So, he wrote:
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A friend of Gio (or maybe Gio himself; he gives himself BAs). DOGGEREL (at best). And it's "INalienable".

Poor judgment. Poor writing. Poor English. Poor bastard!
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O great Poet! Reveal thyself!
O, I forgot! Hello Peter!
Peter: Can you decode the statement of Andrew up there? You are the only one on Earth who can do it, Andrew-Peter!
Do you know the meaning of the word "Bastard" Peter? Challenge me Peter! In two languages or three!
 
I'm feeling pretty lucky ...but I only have one old account, mate ...
Did you turn Chinese? It's good to see you're getting plenty of hate ...
I always feel at home here with you because you're always fighting it out ...
Glad to see things are still the same with you calling them out in a shout ...
Sorry that I once again flipped out over my dead ...
Nothing much changes when I'm off my old head ...
Dig? ... Ha-ha-ha ... you are such a star ...
Don't ever change the person you are ...
I'm not under the influence of liquor ...
Snicker - Snicker - Snicker -

"Bronze fog bell", 'eh? ... more like a Greek fog horn ...
Whatever I do, it seems my friendship to you is sworn ...

And this yahoo joint is like a flipping pub brawl ...
They knock me out and then back here I crawl ...

It is all fairly funny in hindsight ...
Lucky - Lucky - Lucky- I'm not so bright ...

I dunno how I even get a laugh out of this site ...
Suppose it must be because it rhymes with shite ...

And I will give you 8 thumbs up ... you crazy Greek man ...
At least I feel at home with a bloke who has a deep tan ...
(((LOL)))
Begging for them to challenge you ...
What a ripper and so true blue!!!

I hope Andrew comes back so I get a bit of a laugh ...!
 
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