writing style? Basically, I just want a few opinions on whether or not I have a decent plot/story/characters/etc going on.
Yes, I know Y!A isn't the best place for literary advice, but I still want opinions from all different people.
And yes, the first few paragraphs/chapters are fast paced and reveling. The book is about the couples' first anniversary and all the shenanigans that go on.
It's also still a bit rough, ignore grammatical errors if they occur.
A few questions after reading
1.) What do you like about the characters?
2.) What don't you like?
3.) How much do you like/hate the way I write?
4.) Is the story line good, interesting, and not too cliche?
5.) Should I keep writing?


That's it. Thanks in advance

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