Okay so this is my first chapter to my story.
tell me what you think.
Blood, blood and ink, there was so much of it. I picked her up off the white rug and carried her down stairs from her pink room, the light in her big hazel eyes were fading, her long blond hair just hung still from her head. My 13year old sister Elizabeth just laid there in my arms dyeing.
“Mom,” I screamed! She ran into the hallway where I had Elizabeth in my arms.
My mother screamed, and ran her hands over her baby girl’s face moving whatever hair out of the way. She grabbed her out of my arms in a sudden motion, we ran to the family car that was parked out front. When my sister was born, she was born very sick. So we had to make sure to be careful around her.
Our mother gave her back to me. She picked up her cell and called our father, “Jonathan, go to emergency room of Notion hospital Elizabeth is hurt… No I don’t know what happened… I don’t care, if you get fired… I don’t care just get your ass to the fucking hospital… for our child.” She hung up the phone. My sister is a hemophiliac, if she gets a cut she could die, then it hit me Elizabeth my one and only sister might die.
We got there and there was a bed waiting for her. Mother must have called earlier. I didn’t know what they were doing to her once they ripped her out of my hands. A nurse with black curly hair told us we couldn’t go into the operating room to risky. So we stayed in the lobby. I couldn’t help stair at the big white doors.
Dad wasn’t there yet. “Mom,” I whispered her eyes were red and looked sore. She nodded in response to her hearing me. “It was an accident, we were fooling around, I w-w-was playing keep away with her dairy… I didn’t know she had one of the new pens in her hand… and she tripped. She tripped… over the bed, the pen was facing her. It went in her.” My mother started sobbing. This was my fault, it was my entire fault.
Then dad came running in, “where is she,” he ran over to my mother almost shaking her. I pulled him off of her. He looked at me.
“We were told to stay here, d-dad,” I sutured, and then I told him what happen.
“Mark, what did you do,” He cried! I sat there silent. As him and my mother sat there and sobbed, I didn’t make a sound.
Then a doctor came out to us, from the big white doors, “Mr. and Mrs. James may I speak with you in the next room.” All three of us got up and walked out of the waiting room. We walked into a smaller room, with her. “Your daughter Elizabeth…” she didn’t have to do anything we knew what was coming next. “I’m sorry we tried everything we could she lost too much blood. I’m so sorry for your lost.”
My mother didn’t say anything. We got up to go identify the body. It was her all right, she was still, the light in her eyes were gone. “Mom can we go,” I pulled on her shirt.
She nodded we left. They never wanted a son, I knew it. It they always love Elizabeth more.
We got in the car in silent. My mother pulled out a bottle and handed it to my father. My father fell asleep and I just sat in the back of the car. We started shaking the rode was on a cliff. The car went left and right. I started to get dizzy. “Mom are you ok?”
She screamed at me, “SHUT UP,” next I knew everything went black. I was in a hospital bed hooked up to an I.V.
There was a swarm of people around me. I don’t know what happened. “Mark wake up, Mark wake up.” I was beginning to wake; once my eyes fully adjusted I was at the hospital again. Why was I here? Where were mom and dad, “mom, dad?” I looked around and there was no one. Where the hell could they be and why dose my head and shoulder hurt.
A female doctor with red hair came up to me, she sat on the bed next to me. “Where is my mom, and where is my dad?” She frowned at the question.
“Mark, you were in a accident going home from the hospital, the car crush went off a cliff you were lucky you survived. Your mother and father didn’t.” I sat there in shocked, first my sister now my mother and father. I am twelve years old I am not supposed to go through stuff like this. She and the other doctors got up and left.
What am I going to do?
this was only a prologue to show, how mark ended up alone, yes i am sorry for i will try to fix it and on top of that i didn't know that girls can't really have the illness. thank you everyone
I'm sorry i really didn't want to drag it out to much i'm working on the spelling mistakes, and if anything The reason Mark is like that is because he is in a state of shock. His mother and father were bawling and he is in a state of shock. This is ONLY a PROLOGUE.
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