How should I start this letter?

[ttDavies]

I am writing a proposal for a peer remediation program in my school and I need a strong, convincing introduction. The main problems in my school are:-bullying/teasing-graffiti-fights

[tt:smile4me:tt]

i would start out with the number of the incidents reported.. like 5 fights so far this month..... this number of bullying incidents....4 graffitied walls.....etc.... and once youve named them all off then say something like this is going on at this school....once you grab their attention and make it known that these things are actually going on then they should listen to you...hope that helps somewhat...congrats to you though for wanting to make a difference

[tt~hershey~tt]

dear whoever, I understand that you are very busy but i feel that it is necessary to inform you about some issues..........