Can someone please help me with my poem?? it's sorta a emergency!!?

okay soo i need to write a symbloic love peom that is 20 lines and has atleast 5 symbols representing love-1 similie,1 metaphor,1 personification and a rhyming scheme. the symbols i came up with are...red roses...promise ring....friendship knot...doved...and intertwine vinesi have the first 16 lines of the poem but need four more here is the poem so far:It started off as a friendship knotI knew that i would like you a lotthe first time i layed eyes on youMy heart skipped a beat or twoA feeling so true, so pure as a doveThis feeling is what some call loveSomething that cannot be expressed in a simple proseBut is seen in the tracing lines of a red roseWe are sitting hear under this_________( i need a word hear) moonCan you hear my heart play its musical tuneAs you propose to me this promise ringthe quite night starts yo sing...kinda corny....but yeahh can u also point out the simlie, metaphor and personification...thank youu!!thank you to everyone soo muchh!!this really helped me a lot!! =]thank you to everyone soo muchh!!this really helped me a lot!! =]Here is my final draft thanks to everyone who helped out....The first time I laid eyes on you-My heart skipped a beat or two.Vines interwined as a friendship knot,I knew that my life would change a lot.A sense of power like true love doves;Is this the feeling that some call love?It's something that cannot be expressed in a simpe prose,But is seen in the tracing lines of a red rose.We are sitting here under this crescent moon.Can you hear my heart play a melodius tune?As you propose to me this promise ring,The quiet night starts begin to sing.A bird in flight, i take to the skyTasting the honey in your tender sigh.This mystery, our hearts intwined,engraved forever deep in my mind.i am really sorry for copying your stanza Torit but i didn't add the last one becasue that sounds liek something that just isn't me. It doesn't sound like my writing. And ♪Po3ticMi$tr3$$♫ thank you too u were also a lot of help...thanx for all teh encourgement! =]i ment " The quiet night stars begin to sing."I made some grammer mistakes on my final so this is the real final draft:The RingThe first time I laid eyes on you-my heart skipped a beat or two.Vines intertwined as a friendship knot;I knew that my life would change a lot.A sense of power like true love doves;is this the feeling that some call love?It's something that cannot be expressed in a simple prose,but is seen in the tracing lines of a red rose.We are sitting here under this crescent moon;can you hear my heart play a melodies tune?As you propose to me this promise ring,the quiet night stars begin to sing.A bird in flight, I take to the skytasting the honey in your tender sigh.This mystery, our hearts intwined,engraved forever deep in my mind.

You should make the changes you want -- make it yours.When you use punctuation within a poem, then you need to be consistent througout the work. Always spell check your work -- even run the spell checker on mail -- the more professional you are, the better your work will be.The Ringby your nameThe first time I glanced at you -- my heart skipped a beat or two;vines intertwined as a friendship knot. I knew that my life would change a lot, A sense of power like true love doves; is this the feeling that some call love? I cannot express it in simple prose; it's tracing the petals of a single red rose. We are sitting here under this crescent moon; can you hear my heart play a melodious tune? I give a Promise Ring, my love so strong;breathless until the night bursts into song.A bird in flight, I take to the sky,tasting the honey in your tender sigh.This mystery, our hearts intwined,engraved forever deep in my mind.Smiling, laughing two doves cavort;we are those doves as we court.The ring saying you are mine now,symbol of my unyielding vow..Best of luck. Send me your finished version.

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I don't want to re-write this kk? So, all I did was edit <3I loved it so far and truly can't wait till you post the finished product *^_^*