Do you feel strongly about this poem?

• Mar 16, 2008

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ari_garnica

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*****A guy can dream, can’t he?By TD EuwaiteYou know what you wantYou want to grab her by the zipperAnd slip her out of that gownDressed down, to hose and pink panties*****I like pink...but am open to more colors.

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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arkpudel

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I feel like it needsmorelines.I was just getting into it.....

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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Armand S

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HMMMMMMMM.you need to keep the poem going

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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Arkansas finest be BALLIN

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Sizzle.

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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Arman A

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it sound like what ima do tonight!

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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armbar60805

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I like it! It could be longer, but that's up to you!

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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arkahm

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A+ my friend. TD, this is your best poem yet. I would have preferred a description of her measurements etc. but hey this is a positive start.

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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arjuns

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i like it.it conveys vivid thoughts of temptation, unbridled-lust , and desire in just a few words.very well done.

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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armatose

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My goodness! You sure switch gears in a hurry! LOL!That's it??? To me it kind of seemms like the end or beginning of a longer poem.....Nice though.

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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Aristotle

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Why pink?

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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Arlene S

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There be hunger in that there poem... as intended.

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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arizonaprincess2

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Not at all a fan of pinkwith a special one I enjoy the "slink"and gown or slacks falling to groundwould hopefully cause both to "bound" As once sung in Snow White maybe, or was it Cinderlyn? A dream is a wish a heart makes.Rock on.Steven Wolf

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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arizona18

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This is what she actually wants:http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Aqk.Im7fYWY0VnUtpJMDr9zsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20080318004720AAw4EYSA girl can dream too, can't she? =)

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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aris

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Very strongly. How about black?

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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Armand S

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You know what I want, and you know you know! No arguements there.

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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ARIZcats15

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Roses are redViolets are blueI may not look like Mae WestBut I guess I'll do So save up your nickelsAnd save up your dimesAnd when you get to quartersCome up and see me sometime!

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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Arius-Tatsu

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its kinda perverted

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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arjuns

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What is hose? Is it stockings? Or tights?Gee, what an awful image, even a beautiful girl must be off-putting in tights (over the pink panties) but does anyone still wear stockings?Maybe they do and I am leading a sheltered life!

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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Arman2Dito

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well im not a guy but i can understand how you would feel strongly...

 

• Mar 16, 2008

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Arlene B

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LOL, well don't hold back by all means <3Encore, Encore!you so silly sometimes *^_^*