Do you feel strongly about this poem?

[ari_garnica]

*****A guy can dream, can’t he?By TD EuwaiteYou know what you wantYou want to grab her by the zipperAnd slip her out of that gownDressed down, to hose and pink panties*****I like pink...but am open to more colors.

[arkpudel]

I feel like it needsmorelines.I was just getting into it.....

[Armand S]

HMMMMMMMM.you need to keep the poem going

[Arkansas finest be BALLIN]

Sizzle.

[Arman A]

it sound like what ima do tonight!

[armbar60805]

I like it! It could be longer, but that's up to you!

[arkahm]

A+ my friend. TD, this is your best poem yet. I would have preferred a description of her measurements etc. but hey this is a positive start.

[arjuns]

i like it.it conveys vivid thoughts of temptation, unbridled-lust , and desire in just a few words.very well done.

[armatose]

My goodness! You sure switch gears in a hurry! LOL!That's it??? To me it kind of seemms like the end or beginning of a longer poem.....Nice though. :-)

[Aristotle]

Why pink?