Will you comment on this very short poem?

[ttt]

The weight of the world
Is measured in pictures
Panties and whiskey
Viral surprise in the village
Cash out now,
While you can still see
Your esteem

It's floating off
Into the coldest regions
Of space and time.

[thomas p]

An interesting little poem - I like the initial alliteration, although you do not follow that tune during the rest of the lines (line 4 does not count).
You still need a title for this... and in line 8, I would omit the word 'it's'. The rhythm becomes more fluent by that.

[eleanorrudkin]

lol i like it good job