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To start with, the author spelled "fanaticism" "fanatism."
This did not endear the author or the article to me.
The tone was chatty and familiar, and it sounded like a lot of old stuff in a new suit.
As one famous author said:
Your story is both new and good.
But what is new is not good, and what is good is not new!
If you are going to get published in a major publication, make sure you get proofread!
Next, come up with something original.
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