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    Would you c/c on my little rant, if you will call it so?

    The breeze of an open school door
    Creeps up my shirt and lays ice over by body.
    Shivering, I put up my hood,
    Melting ice off of my head.

    The dean walks past
    Eyes narrowed looking for violators
    Of all his fairy-land rules
    That are believed in like the fairies themselves
    And enforced like so.

    I fall into the stone wall,
    Hood up, cold receding
    Those with shirts up to their middle
    Hats on, denim underwear
    POP like the cleavage from their shirts

    And he'll walk past them all
    Fairies dancing away on sugar tip toes
    But eating rotten apples.
    Hoods, they are a violation, worthy of In School Suspension
    He snarled, pointing
    Singling out me.
    Defenseless, I open my mouth

    But it is all stuffed up with bobbing butts
    That walk right by
    And stomachs with blinking signs
    to say
    I was just a little cold after a while

    Embarrassed, I rip it off
    and cast my eyes down
    Feeling more chilled than before.
    AMEN to ya both, and I love your attitude, BG!

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    Amen to what she said.. that is a good rant, I catch the drift and it shifts into high gear.
    I think rules are sometimes made to break and sometimes a statement needs to be made.

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    Amen to what she said.. that is a good rant, I catch the drift and it shifts into high gear.
    I think rules are sometimes made to break and sometimes a statement needs to be made.

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    Amen to what she said.. that is a good rant, I catch the drift and it shifts into high gear.

    I think rules are sometimes made to break and sometimes a statement needs to be made.


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