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I need help for my short story i have an introduction which my teacher sadi...
...was good but need a good plot..... ... this is what i have so far:
"Hiya, are you ready?" asked Cleo eagerly
"What? No I've just woken up" Winston replied. half asleep.
"Well hurry up then. I'll be over in a few minutes!" she snapped , slamming down the phone.
Winston groaned whilst running up the stairs. Cleo, his best friend, had planned a day out, but she hadn't told him where they were going. He had a feeling today wasn't going to go well. Even thought she had been his friend for most of his life he still hadn't learnt to trust her.
But Winston was soon interrupted in his thoughts, when someone jumped on him suddenly.
"Please, please can I come with you. PLEASE!" they yelled. It seemed, Henry, Winston's younger brother had been listening in on the phonecall.
if you have any ideas for a plot then they would be welcome. I want cleo to be very adventurous and get them into all sorts of trouble. any improvements for the intro would be good too. I'm in yr 9 so have my SAT's soon and i need this to be good.
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