Thread: i need help with my introduction, this is what i have so far?

What do you feel about smoking cigarettes? Well, how would you feel if i told you that there is about 4,000 chemicals in a cigarette smoke, which many are toxic.i need about 3 more sentences, and if there are some flaws please tell me

How do you feel about smoking cigarettes? How would you feel if you discovered there were 4,000 chemicals, many of which are toxic, in a cigarette?

well you could continue with something like this...How would you feel if I told you smoking leads to cancer, ect. and that it contains harmful substances like rat poison*, ect. *I think rat poison is in cigarettes, if it isnt, put something that is =D

ok......i agree with the first. BUT! with theirs and yours, DO NOT, start a sentence with "Well" AND, youre last sentence has a misplaced modifier.....so it should read, "How would you feel if I told you there are about 4,000 chemicals in a cigarette smoke, many of which are toxic." ps....the first reply sounds the best......