Okay so for my english essay i have to write a 5 paragraph essay on this book called the Good Earth. Im having trouble with my intro. basically the good earth takes place in ancient china so women are subservient. But my thesis is about how even though women had subservient roles in society they could still gain power and were more powerful than men inside of society

Intro:

Imagine a world where you deemed inferior to someone else because of your gender. A world where you could’t have certain rights or responsibilities because of your gender. To be even thought of unlucky or bringing bad luck because of the gender you were born.


Also does this make sense? I wanted to say that on the outside of society ( like you know what everyone thinks you are and what role you are) women were subservient but inside of Society (what actually was happening, and who actually was powerful and stuff) they were powerful and strong